17A: Elevator Pitch No.2


Reflection on feedback:

Unfortunately, I did not get feedback from my group, but I realized some issues that were wrong with my first elevator pitch based on lectures. first, I mentioned my name which I should have not. Second, I added a price to my business idea. Realistically, my business idea would between $5 to $20 depending on various factors. These 2 changes, in my opinion, made my elevator pitch 2 better. 

Comments

  1. UnknownOctober 29, 2018 at 10:28 AM

    Hi Nicolas! I hope you had a nice weekend. I thought you did a great job on this elevator pitch, and it seems like you definitely fixed a few things that you mentioned in your reflection. I did not get any feedback either, so it took a lot of internal reflection to see what exactly I had to fix. Adding a price is a good idea because then the clients will be able to get a better idea of the product. Great job!

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  2. UnknownOctober 29, 2018 at 4:43 PM

    Hey Nicolas! I think you did a good job at hooking your audience. You described the problem your business fixes in the first line of the pitch. I was not able to add a price to my pitch, which is where my second pitch suffered. I did, however, describe that my business would be cheaper than the alternatives. Once again, I think you did a good job at improving your pitch.

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