22: Elevator Pitch No.3
Reflection:
This is the same elevator pitch from the last assignment. I believe I could not make any noticeable improvements. I believe I made a lot of gestures to provide dynamic. I was not sitting, did not use a webcam, and everything was memorized. The only defect I would have to fix for my elevator pitch #3 would be my accent to be more clear and understandable which is quite impossible. With this in mind, I believe I vocalized my words perfectly to be understandable for my audience. In addition, I added a price and I did not introduce myself which were the changes I needed to fix. finally, I showed a device (smartphone) to attract attention.
Hi Nicolas - I hope you had a great weekend, and that you are doing well! I thought that it was a great idea that you used your old elevator pitch, because I do agree - it seems like it must be difficult to make any improvements. I thought you did a great job on this elevator pitch and that any client would be interested in your business idea. I hope you get to use it one day! I wish you the best of luck and hope you have a great week.
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